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Band 9 model answers for the main Task 1 visuals and Task 2 essay types, each with notes on exactly what makes it score highly.

How to use these: write your own answer to a question first, with a timer (20 minutes for Task 1, 40 for Task 2), then open the model and compare. Look at the structure and how ideas are developed, not just the vocabulary. Don't memorise these answers: examiners are trained to spot memorised language, and it scores poorly.

Task 1Bar chartPractice Test 1

The bar chart below shows the average number of hours per week that people in three age groups in one country spent on four leisure activities in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Average weekly hours spent on leisure activities, by age group (2024)Watching TVSocial mediaExerciseReading0481216hours per weekWatching TV, 16–24: 66Social media, 16–24: 1414Exercise, 16–24: 44Reading, 16–24: 2216–24Watching TV, 25–44: 99Social media, 25–44: 88Exercise, 25–44: 33Reading, 25–44: 3325–44Watching TV, 45–64: 1515Social media, 45–64: 44Exercise, 45–64: 2.52.5Reading, 45–64: 5545–64
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The bar chart compares the average weekly time that people in three age groups in one country spent on four leisure activities in 2024.

Overall, the youngest group devoted most of their free time to social media, whereas television dominated the leisure time of the oldest group. Exercise and reading occupied comparatively few hours across all ages.

Social media use declined sharply with age. People aged 16–24 spent 14 hours a week on it, almost twice as long as the 25–44 group (8 hours) and more than three times as long as those aged 45–64 (4 hours). Television viewing followed the opposite pattern, rising from 6 hours among the youngest respondents to 9 hours for the middle group and 15 hours for the oldest, which made it the single most time-consuming activity in the chart.

Reading and exercise accounted for far less time. Reading increased gradually with age, from 2 hours to 5 hours a week, while exercise fell slightly, from 4 hours for the youngest group to 3 hours and then 2.5 hours for those aged 45–64.

Why it scores highly

  • The overview states the two opposite trends and the minor activities, with no figures.
  • Data is grouped by pattern (rising with age, falling with age), not described bar by bar.
  • Comparisons are precise: “almost twice as long”, “more than three times as long”.
  • Varied, accurate verbs: devoted, dominated, occupied, accounted for, declined, followed the opposite pattern.
  • No opinion or speculation about why the figures differ.
Task 1Process diagramPractice Test 2

The diagram below shows how paper is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

How paper is recycled1Collectionused paper fromhomes and offices2Sortingby type and qualityat recycling centre3Pulpingmixed with waterand chemicals;broken into fibres4Screeningstaples, plasticand glue removed5De-inkingair bubbles liftink to the surface6Bleaching(optional) fibreswhitened7Formingsprayed onto movingmesh; pressed byrollers; dried byheated cylinders8Rollingwound onto largereels; cut; sent tomake new products
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The diagram illustrates the process by which used paper is recycled to produce new paper products.

Overall, the process consists of eight stages, beginning with the collection of waste paper and ending with the production of large reels of new paper. It can be divided into three main phases: preparing the waste paper, turning it into clean pulp, and forming new sheets.

First, used paper is collected from homes and offices and taken to a recycling centre, where it is sorted according to its type and quality. It is then mixed with water and chemicals and broken down into fibres. Next, this pulp is screened to remove contaminants such as staples, plastic and glue, before being de-inked, a stage in which air bubbles carry the ink to the surface so that it can be removed.

After an optional bleaching stage to whiten the fibres, the clean pulp is sprayed onto a moving mesh, where it is pressed by rollers and dried by heated cylinders. Finally, the paper is wound onto large reels, which are cut and sent to manufacturers to be made into new products.

Why it scores highly

  • The overview gives the number of stages, the start and end points, and groups them into phases.
  • The passive voice is used naturally, as a process description requires: is collected, is sorted, is screened.
  • Sequencing is varied: First, It is then, Next, before being, After, Finally.
  • Every stage in the diagram is covered, with details paraphrased rather than copied.
  • Relative clauses (“where it is sorted”, “a stage in which…”) combine steps smoothly.
Task 1MapsPractice Test 3

The maps below show the village of Thornbury in 2000 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Thornbury, 2000RiverMain roadRailwayPlayingfieldFarmlandWoodlandSchoolShopThornbury, todayRiverMain roadRailwayPlayingfieldHousingestateWoodlandSchoolCar parkCaféStationParkingN
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The maps compare the village of Thornbury in 2000 with its present-day layout.

Overall, the village has become considerably more developed, with new housing and transport links replacing much of the green space in the north, while the area south of the main road has changed relatively little.

The most striking change is in the north-west, where the farmland that existed in 2000 has been replaced by a large housing estate. This is linked to the main road by a new access road, which meets it at a roundabout. To the east of the estate, the woodland beside the river has been reduced to roughly half of its original size.

South of the main road, the school has been extended and now has its own car park, and the village shop has been converted into a café. The playing field beside the river remains unchanged. Finally, a station has been built beside the railway line on the southern edge of the village, together with a small car park, making the village far more accessible by train.

Why it scores highly

  • The overview summarises the overall direction of change (more developed, north changed most) without details.
  • Location language is precise: in the north-west, to the east of, south of the main road, on the southern edge.
  • Change verbs are varied and accurate: has been replaced by, has been reduced to, has been extended, has been converted into, has been built.
  • The present perfect passive is used correctly for changes between then and now.
  • Unchanged features are mentioned briefly, which shows the whole map has been considered.
Task 1Pie chart and tableExtra model

The pie chart shows how households in Country A used energy in 2024. The table shows average annual household energy consumption in three countries in 2004 and 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Household energy use by purpose, Country A, 2024Space heating: 42%42%Space heating: 42%Appliances and electronics: 20%20%Appliances and electronics: 20%Water heating: 18%18%Water heating: 18%Cooking: 8%8%Cooking: 8%Lighting: 7%7%Lighting: 7%Other: 5%Other: 5%
Average annual household energy consumption (kWh)
Country20042024
Country A21,00016,500
Country B18,00015,800
Country C12,50013,200
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The pie chart shows how households in Country A used energy in 2024, while the table compares average annual household energy consumption in three countries in 2004 and 2024.

Overall, heating accounted for the majority of household energy use in Country A, and consumption fell over the twenty-year period in two of the three countries, with Country C the only exception.

Space heating was by far the largest category, representing 42% of household energy use in Country A. Appliances and electronics made up a fifth of the total, slightly more than water heating (18%), and together these three uses accounted for 80% of household energy. By contrast, cooking and lighting represented only 8% and 7% respectively, with other uses making up the remaining 5%.

Turning to the table, Country A had the highest consumption in both years, although its figure fell from 21,000 kWh to 16,500 kWh, the largest decrease of the three countries. Consumption in Country B also declined, from 18,000 kWh to 15,800 kWh. Country C, which used the least energy, was the only country to see an increase, with its figure rising slightly from 12,500 kWh to 13,200 kWh.

Why it scores highly

  • With two visuals, the introduction and overview cover both.
  • One body paragraph per visual keeps the answer easy to follow; “Turning to the table” signals the switch.
  • Figures are combined to make a meaningful point (“together these three uses accounted for 80%”).
  • Accurate fractions and percentages: “a fifth”, “by far the largest”, “respectively”.
  • The exception (Country C) is highlighted in both the overview and the body.
Task 1Line graphStudy app example

The line graph shows the percentage of households with high-speed internet access in three countries between 2005 and 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Households with high-speed internet access (%)Country ACountry BCountry C020406080100% of households20052010201520202025Country A, 2005: 45Country A, 2010: 68Country A, 2015: 82Country A, 2020: 90Country A, 2025: 94Country A 94Country B, 2005: 20Country B, 2010: 30Country B, 2015: 48Country B, 2020: 70Country B, 2025: 85Country B 85Country C, 2005: 10Country C, 2010: 12Country C, 2015: 18Country C, 2020: 25Country C, 2025: 41Country C 41
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The line graph compares the proportion of households with high-speed internet access in three countries, A, B and C, over the twenty years from 2005 to 2025.

Overall, access rose in all three countries, but Country A remained the most connected throughout, while Country B saw the most dramatic growth and almost closed the gap with A by the end of the period. Country C lagged well behind the others in every year.

In 2005, 45% of households in Country A had high-speed access, more than double the figure for Country B (20%) and over four times that of Country C (10%). Over the next decade, the rate in Country A climbed steadily to 82%, after which its growth slowed, reaching 94% in 2025.

Country B, by contrast, began slowly, rising by only ten percentage points to 30% by 2010, but then accelerated sharply, reaching 70% in 2020 and 85% in 2025. Country C showed the weakest growth: its figure edged up to just 18% in 2015 and 25% in 2020, before rising more noticeably to 41% in the final five years.

Why it scores highly

  • The overview identifies the leader, the fastest riser and the laggard.
  • Rates of change are described precisely: climbed steadily, accelerated sharply, edged up.
  • “Percentage points” is used correctly for differences between percentages.
  • Each country's trend is described once, with key figures rather than every data point.
Task 2Opinion (agree or disagree)Practice Test 1

Some people believe that public transport in cities should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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The idea of abolishing fares on buses and trains has gained popularity in recent years, and a number of cities have already experimented with the policy. Although free travel would bring certain benefits, I believe that, in most cases, public money would be better spent on improving services and on targeted discounts for those who need them.

The case for free public transport rests largely on its potential to change behaviour. If journeys cost nothing, the argument goes, many drivers would leave their cars at home, reducing congestion and air pollution in city centres. Free travel would also help low-income households, for whom fares can take up a significant proportion of their budget, and would make it easier for people without cars to reach jobs, education and healthcare.

However, the evidence that price is the main obstacle to using public transport is weaker than it might appear. For many commuters, the decisive factors are reliability, frequency and journey time. A free bus that arrives irregularly and takes twice as long as a car will not persuade many drivers to switch; instead, removing fares often mainly attracts people who would otherwise have walked or cycled. Meanwhile, fares provide much of the income that operators need to maintain and expand their networks, and replacing that revenue would require either higher taxes or cuts to other services.

A more effective approach, in my view, would be to invest in faster and more frequent services while offering reduced or free fares to specific groups, such as students, older people and those on low incomes. This would protect the people most affected by the cost of travel without sacrificing the funds needed to make public transport a genuine alternative to the car.

In conclusion, while free public transport is an appealing idea, improving services and targeting financial support would deliver greater benefits for both passengers and cities.

Why it scores highly

  • A clear, qualified position appears in the introduction and is maintained to the conclusion.
  • The opposing view is presented fairly and fully before it is answered, which strengthens the argument.
  • Each body paragraph has one central idea, developed with reasons and a concrete example (the slow, irregular bus).
  • A constructive alternative shows depth of thinking beyond simple agreement or disagreement.
  • Precise collocations: rests largely on, decisive factors, targeted discounts, genuine alternative.
Task 2Advantages and disadvantagesPractice Test 2

Many museums and art galleries now make their collections available to view online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Write at least 250 words.

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In recent years, a growing number of museums and galleries have digitised their collections and made them freely available online. In my view, although this trend carries some risks, its advantages clearly outweigh them.

The most significant benefit is access. Many people will never have the opportunity to visit the world's major museums, whether because of distance, cost or disability. Online collections allow a student in a rural village to examine a painting in Paris or an ancient manuscript in Cairo in extraordinary detail, often more closely than through a glass case. Digitisation also serves researchers, who can compare objects held in different institutions without travelling, and it creates a permanent record that would survive if the originals were damaged or destroyed.

Critics argue that viewing art on a screen is a poor substitute for the real thing. The scale, texture and physical presence of a sculpture or a large canvas are difficult to convey in an image, and some fear that audiences will settle for a superficial experience. There are also concerns that if people can see collections for free at home, fewer will buy tickets, reducing the income on which museums depend.

These objections, however, are less persuasive than they first appear. Online images tend to stimulate interest rather than replace visits; many people who discover a work online become more eager, not less, to see it in person. Museums can also generate revenue from digital activity, through online exhibitions, educational partnerships and sales of high-quality reproductions. And for the millions who cannot visit at all, a digital encounter is not a second-best option but the only one available.

Overall, while online collections cannot fully reproduce the experience of standing in front of an original work, they greatly widen access to culture and knowledge, and I believe this makes them a highly positive development.

Why it scores highly

  • The question asks which side is stronger, and the answer gives a clear judgement in the first paragraph.
  • Disadvantages are stated fairly, then evaluated, rather than simply listed.
  • Specific examples (a student in a rural village, a manuscript in Cairo) make the argument concrete.
  • Complex structures are used accurately: “whether because of…”, “not a second-best option but the only one available”.
  • Cohesion comes from ideas, not just linking words: “These objections, however, are less persuasive…”
Task 2Two-part questionPractice Test 3

Many people now prefer to watch films at home rather than go to the cinema. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development? Write at least 250 words.

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Over the past two decades, the number of people who choose to watch new films at home rather than in a cinema has risen considerably. This essay will explain the main reasons for this shift and argue that, on balance, it is a positive development, despite some regrettable consequences.

The most obvious cause is technology. Streaming services now offer vast libraries of films for a monthly fee that is often lower than the price of a single cinema ticket, and many new releases appear online within weeks of their premiere. At the same time, large high-definition televisions and home sound systems have become affordable, narrowing the gap between the cinema and the living room. Convenience also plays a part: viewers can pause a film, watch it whenever it suits them, and avoid the travel, queues and distractions that a cinema visit can involve.

In many respects, this trend is beneficial. Watching at home is cheaper for families, more accessible for people with disabilities or those living far from a cinema, and it gives audiences a far wider choice of films, including independent and foreign productions that local cinemas rarely show.

Nevertheless, something valuable is being lost. Watching a film in a darkened room with hundreds of strangers is a shared cultural experience that a sofa cannot replicate, and many directors still design their work for the scale of the big screen. Moreover, if cinema attendance continues to fall, local cinemas may close, reducing the number of social spaces in town centres, particularly for young people.

In conclusion, the move towards home viewing is driven by cost, technology and convenience, and it has made films more affordable and accessible than ever. I therefore see it as a largely positive trend, but one that makes it all the more important to support cinemas as places where films can still be enjoyed together.

Why it scores highly

  • Both questions are answered directly, each in its own section.
  • The writer's view on the second question is signposted in the introduction and confirmed in the conclusion.
  • Causes are explained, not just listed (why the cost and quality of home viewing matter).
  • Balanced evaluation: benefits and losses are weighed before reaching a judgement.
  • Natural, precise vocabulary: narrowing the gap, plays a part, cannot replicate, all the more important.
Task 2Discussion (both views + opinion)Study app example

Some people believe that universities should focus on providing academic knowledge, while others think they should prepare students for employment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Universities have traditionally been places of scholarship, yet rising tuition fees and a competitive job market have led many to argue that their main purpose should be to prepare graduates for work. While there are strong arguments on both sides, I believe universities should prioritise academic knowledge while building employability into how that knowledge is taught.

Those who favour a vocational focus point out that most students enrol in higher education to improve their career prospects. When graduates spend three or four years studying and accumulate considerable debt, it seems reasonable to expect that their degree will equip them with skills employers value, such as project management, data analysis or professional communication. Courses that include internships or industry-led projects also allow students to test their career choices before committing to them.

On the other hand, supporters of a traditional academic model argue that specific workplace skills quickly become outdated, whereas the ability to analyse evidence, construct an argument and learn independently lasts a lifetime. A history graduate, for example, may never use their knowledge of the medieval economy at work, but the discipline of weighing conflicting sources is directly relevant to careers in law, policy or journalism. Moreover, if universities simply train students for today's vacancies, society loses the fundamental research that produces tomorrow's industries.

In my view, the two aims are not mutually exclusive. Universities should remain centres of rigorous academic study, since this is what distinguishes them from short vocational courses, but they can deliver that study through practical assignments, placements and collaboration with employers. In this way, graduates gain both deep knowledge and the ability to apply it.

Why it scores highly

  • Both views are developed equally, each with a reason and an example, before the writer's own view.
  • The opinion is nuanced (the aims are “not mutually exclusive”) yet clear.
  • The history-graduate example makes an abstract point concrete.
  • Cohesive devices are varied and never mechanical: Those who favour…, On the other hand…, Moreover…, In my view…
Task 2Problem and solutionExtra model

In many cities, housing is becoming unaffordable for young people. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it? Write at least 250 words.

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In many major cities, the cost of buying or even renting a home has risen far faster than young people's incomes, leaving many unable to live independently until well into their thirties. This essay will examine the main causes of this problem and suggest measures that could address it.

The fundamental cause is a shortage of supply. Cities attract jobs and people, but in many places the construction of new homes has failed to keep pace with population growth, often because of strict planning rules, limited land and the high cost of building. When demand consistently exceeds supply, prices inevitably rise. This effect has been intensified by the treatment of housing as an investment. Low interest rates in the past encouraged investors to buy property as an asset, and in popular areas a significant proportion of homes are now let as short-term holiday rentals rather than lived in. Young people, who typically have lower incomes and smaller savings, are the first to be priced out.

Addressing the problem therefore requires action on several fronts. Most importantly, governments should make it easier to build, by reforming planning systems, releasing public land for housing and encouraging higher-density developments close to public transport. Secondly, cities could limit the number of properties used for short-term rentals and tax homes that are left empty, returning more housing to the local market. Finally, governments could expand social and affordable housing, with rents linked to income, and offer targeted help to first-time buyers, although such schemes must be carefully designed so that they do not simply push prices higher.

In conclusion, unaffordable housing for young people is primarily the result of too few homes being built, made worse by the use of property as an investment. Only a combination of increased supply and measures to ensure that homes are used as homes is likely to make city living affordable again.

Why it scores highly

  • Solutions are clearly linked to the causes identified (supply → building; investment → rental limits and taxes).
  • Causes are ranked (“The fundamental cause…”) rather than simply listed.
  • The final solution includes a qualification, showing awareness of possible side effects.
  • Topic-specific collocations are used precisely: keep pace with, priced out, higher-density developments, first-time buyers.

These answers were written by BandLift to meet the public IELTS band 9 descriptors. They have not been marked by official IELTS examiners.